Crit Feedback

Having presented the work shown above in crit, I have been given a lot of useful feedback and some really interesting ideas to try.

- Printing on to physical ward curtains or plastic sheeting in order to provide a more direct link.
- My crit group liked the idea of the tracing paper, describing the Ebola cases as ephemeral although they also raised an interesting point that the ephemerality of the disease is more apparent in the cases of William Pooley and Pauline Cafferekey, however, it seemed to have more of a lasting effect on the lives of people in Umaru's situation.
- The group also discussed that it may be too obscure and need more information in order to make a clear link to the subject matter within my work.

Using this feedback I am going to look at ways of distinguishing the difference between the people pictured in my work and their constructing circumstances. I would also like to look more directly into portraying the sense of hypercondria I previously spoke about, considering ways in which I could recreate such a sense with no visible threat. I am particularly interested in the idea of using ward curtains or a similar material in order to reinforce connotations.